Rust Colored Tongue


At Poetry Jam Laurie Kolp prompted us to write about rust.

Comments

Mary said…
Just perfect, Susie.
Brian Miller said…
sharing traditions is not a bad thing at all...you made rust have a reminiescence
Sherry Blue Sky said…
Could not be said any better! I love your poems-on-images - they make wonderful art cards! Great feast for the eyes for us, too.
Vandana Sharma said…
Nice take on the prompt:)
alan1704 said…
Words are powerful and the tongue is full of life. Leave regrets behind and move on. Very good take on the prompt.
Laurie Kolp said…
Love rust-colored tongue... that says so much and can be interpreted so many ways. Thanks so much for joining in the jam, Susie.
Helen said…
A most interesting take on the prompt ... great haiku!!
Jennifer Wagner said…
Skillfully done Susie--love it.
Peggy said…
Good to see you at Poetry Jam. I love short crisp poems like this. Excellent.
Anonymous said…
oooh... spectacular, Susie - and in next to no words
Sarav said…
The rust wash really adds flavor to the wonderful word images.
:-)

Your tradition is missing an "i"